Владимир Кодебский,
Луцк, Украина
Чтобы никого не смущала ёлочка, я заменил фотографию.
Прочитано 3358 раз. Голосов 13. Средняя оценка: 2,23
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Диавольскому Кодебскому извращателю посвящается:
2013-02-18 11:58:38
Владимир Кодебский еретик всегда
В преклонных летах он спешит написать
Нуждается он в двойнике для себя
Чтоб тысячу лет жить и плясять
Апостола Павла не святым он назвал
Себя как Кодебского всем извергал
Ересь на лево на право бросал
Всех он евреев с собою ровнял
С Богом на (ты) всегда говорит
Подлости нет у него для границ
Вставить ума всем он срочьно спешит
Хочет успеть весь мир отравить
О подожди безумец и тварь
Сколько ты будешь писать как нахал
Все лжеученья твои пискарь
Как для ухи пойдут в навар
Будешь сербать ты юшку свою
Горечи полную аж до краю
Сколько ты перца в её загнал?
Разума видно совсем 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Разочарование - Людмила Солма *)Примечание/пояснение:
*«Былых величий, срам» - (обтрепанная неприглядность разочарований) «лоскуты» житейских парусов надежды или веры во что-то значимое…
**Это был единовременно-эмоциональный экспромт порыв, показавшийся тогда немного странным в реальности осмысления. Нынче под углом воспоминаний принимаю его, как некую поэтическую абстрактность констатаций «разбитых» некогда житейскими обстоятельствами возможной или предполагаемой значимости тогдашних «надежд или чаяний» - разочарование?! с кем же не бывало такого в те сумбурно 90-е года...
Людмила Солма, 09.11.2008
